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Murder in M1, know as Canteen Catastrophe in the rewrite is the only Blog Chapter to be published out of order and then have updated variation upload within the order of the chapters. [1][2]

Second DraftEdit

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Murder in M1
Canon details
Date 14th of October 2013
Teams Tom and Emma
Felix
Book details
Release Date 21st of March 2014
Book NCIS Series
Chapter Number 11

The current variation of Murder in M1 was released on the 21st of March 2014 under the title Murder in M1 (Updated)[1]

PlotEdit

Tom is volunteering in a Year 7 Maths Class and is sat at a table helping his daughter, Emma, with some of the maths within the textbook when there is a knock on the door. Tom looks up to see that it is Felix; Tom automatically reaches for his bag when the teacher asks Felix what he wants. Felix responds by saying that he wishes to speak to Emma about an urgent family matter.

Seeing where the fight was going Tom grabbed the knife out of his bag and shoved it into his daughter's hand. Emma looks at his father with a look of immense worry, before informing Tom that she can't stab him; he told her to just go and that he will attempt to help her by sneaking around.

She goes across the room towards Felix and Tom is trapped against a wall when Felix throws a gravity altering ball at him. Emma tries to stab him the chest but he moves out of the way spins her around, takes the knife and then faces her towards Tom before pulling the knife across her neck before disappearing. Once Tom manages to get down he runs over to his daughter's dead body and just starts crying while the rest the class either faint, cry or scream.

AppearancesEdit

Locations FeaturedEdit

First DraftEdit

Previous: Undercover Next: Homicide in Humanities
Murder in M1
Canon details
Date Unknown
Teams Tom and Felix
Book details
Release Date 11th of November 2013
Book NCIS Series
Chapter Number 11

The Original variation of Murder in M1 was released on the 11th of November 2013. [2]

PlotEdit

Tom is volunteering in a year seven maths class when his daughter walks in even though he told her to stay at home. Felix walks in later and distracts Tom long enough for him to get to Emma and kill her. Tom then carries Emma through a Portal to Autopsy after shooting a light into the sky that forms the infinity sign above Coombeshead Academy.

AppearancesEdit

Locations FeaturedEdit

Differences from the Second Draft and First DraftEdit

  • Tom's friend is in the class with him
  • The way Felix gets Tom out of the way is altered so that Tom is pinned against the wall while he was originally just outsmarted.
  • Emma tried to stab Felix
  • Emma wasn't the new kid, instead she was already in the lesson on time getting help from Tom
  • Neither NCIS nor Ducky are featured in the new draft.
  • Tom doesn't create an infinity sign in the sky

ReferencesEdit

  1. 1.0 1.1 http://saga-of-thomas-cane.blogspot.co.uk/2014/03/murder-in-m1-updated.html Murder in M1 will get a redraft once all chapters before it catch up
  2. 2.0 2.1 http://saga-of-thomas-cane.blogspot.co.uk/2013/11/murder-in-m1.html Murder in M1 was released. 11/03/2013

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